FE: Best writing

For the first time I felt that the dark place assignment was really my best work. This also might be the best assignment this year. I felt that I could actually connect with  my writing. I hope other people did to.
It was meant to be a situation of how you dream or how you feel about school. I wanted to capture the idea of what kind of thoughts people would have about. Is dreaming something that makes you scared or was it something siting in your after the day you had. Could this have been a vision as to if terrorist take over California (God forbid). Maybe this could be a comic book in the making, who knows. This writing assignment for me was to keep you thrilled, excited, and scared at the same time.

There are no specific characters in my dark place assignment. I wanted the reader, whoever they may  be to picture themselves in there as there reading. To picture themselves locked trapped, to think of the options they have. What would you do, how  would you do it, what resources do you think you have? The point of me putting it in a school was I wanted to change ti up a bit. This year no one has written anything about school, at least that I'm aware of. I didn't intend to make school seem like hell although for some it already is. The scenery was just the best I could think of. Talk to you later peeps.